Interesting! I thought it was weird how Jack sort of blurted out a bunch of information about 11/7 while tied up, especially after watching his dad get shot. I would think he would just shut down and be more soft spoken rather than crying out and yelling. Just a thought. Then the rabbit could sort of push the questioning to try to get it out of him, instead of Jack giving it all up so easily.
Interesting! I thought it was weird how Jack sort of blurted out a bunch of information about 11/7 while tied up, especially after watching his dad get shot. I would think he would just shut down and be more soft spoken rather than crying out and yelling. Just a thought. Then the rabbit could sort of push the questioning to try to get it out of him, instead of Jack giving it all up so easily.
Appreciate the feedback!
It’s been hard but I am waiting to read this chapter. I’m just writing the climax and ending to my first novel. Normie, I will read you tomorrow.
That’s awesome! Good luck with the writing 🫡
Chapter 5 will be here when you’re ready 👍
This gets more interesting and even, exciting, with each chapter! Keep them coming.
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