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Alison Wells-Dyck's avatar

Very engaging!

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C.S.M.'s avatar

Thank you! 🙏

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GiGi's avatar

Oh my goodness, I am ready to see what happens, and it stops! Bring on next week quickly. I want to see what is in the backpack and what it does. Thanks, C.S.M.

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Kate Pedersen's avatar

So exciting. Easy read. Very well done!

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C.S.M.'s avatar

Appreciate it!

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Alison Wells-Dyck's avatar

Chapter 5 was full of even more twists and turns. Looking forward to next week.

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C.S.M.'s avatar

Glad you are enjoying the story!

More answers will be revealed next week 👀

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Kate Pedersen's avatar

Superior writing. Excellent story telling. I’m on the edge of my chair!

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C.S.M.'s avatar

Let’s go 🔥🔥🔥

Thank you!

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Keith Long's avatar

I’ve been enjoying your story so far - looking forward to Chapter 5. Also, you’ve got an extra R - “All that information on a tiny little drive. He’d learned the truth about what had happened ~~fiver~~ years ago.”

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C.S.M.'s avatar

Thank you for reading! I’m glad you’re enjoying the story 🐇

And thank you for catching that!

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Diane Moder's avatar

WOW! I haven’t been engrossed in a story like this for a long time! You certainly have a gift for writing and I’m excited to receive the next chapter. Keep it up, I want to see what happens in the rest of this book.

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C.S.M.'s avatar

Thank you! 🙏

5 chapters left! 👀

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mitch's avatar

Very good story happy you sent it again , C.S.M. . I missed this chapter the first time . Love the story . Peace to you

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C.S.M.'s avatar

Thank you very much!

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Elizabeth Mondok's avatar

What a cliff hanger! Next week can't come soon enough!

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C.S.M.'s avatar

Had to leave things at a life/death moment 👀

Chapter 5 will be exciting 🔥

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GiGi's avatar

Wow! You have really left us in suspense. Now I have to wait for a week for Chapter 8? Bummer! But I do look forward to the next segment — sounds like modern day on some ways.

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