Very cool beginning! And I really vibe with the theme song as well. Keep up the great work, I'll definitely be reading the rest.
PS: I'm still decently new to Substack, and have yet to add a recommendation for anyone's newsletter, but I'm definitely going to add yours to my list right now. Indie writers helping indie writers..., it's so punk rock. 😎
Dude, nice job you did. May I say something about the way you produce the context? Because it’s nice the way little bits of information are disclosed among the action. It’s no easy to achieve that. Looking forward for the next chapter!
Gripping. Quirky. Dark. Eager to read more. Don’t like guessing future plot line because I prefer to let the story reveal itself without ore-judgement.
Pure enjoyment Pure Suspense!
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Very cool beginning! And I really vibe with the theme song as well. Keep up the great work, I'll definitely be reading the rest.
PS: I'm still decently new to Substack, and have yet to add a recommendation for anyone's newsletter, but I'm definitely going to add yours to my list right now. Indie writers helping indie writers..., it's so punk rock. 😎
Thanks for the great feedback, Dre!
And welcome to Substack 🔥 it's a great place to be
I enjoyed the chapter, and the theme music set the mood.
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Dude, nice job you did. May I say something about the way you produce the context? Because it’s nice the way little bits of information are disclosed among the action. It’s no easy to achieve that. Looking forward for the next chapter!
That means a lot! Really appreciate it 🙌
Gripping. Quirky. Dark. Eager to read more. Don’t like guessing future plot line because I prefer to let the story reveal itself without ore-judgement.
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Enjoyed it! I can envision the events. This has a noirish/Sin City appearance in my head. Looking forward to the next chapter. ➡️2️⃣
Thanks John. I’ve gotta read sin city
Great start C.S.M., looking forward to Chapter 2. - Jim
Thank you!
Obsessed 🙏🏼