Delete These 5 Words from Your Novel
Lesson from C.S.M.
Every word in your novel should contribute to the reader experience.
Often, less is more.
Removing unnecessary words can sharpen your writing, streamline your narrative, and prevent distractions.
These five words, when overused or misused, may diminish the impact of your novel:
1. "Very"
"Very" is a modifier that often adds little value and can be replaced with stronger, more precise language.
Example:
Original: The room was very dark.
Revised: The room was pitch-black.
Original: The food was very delicious.
Revised: The food was exquisite.
2. "Just"
While "just" may seem harmless, its frequent use can dilute the strength of your statements. And most of the times it’s useless.
Example:
Original: She was just about to leave.
Revised: She was about to leave.
Original: He was just trying to help.
Revised: He was trying to help.
3. "Suddenly"
"Suddenly" is an adverb that can disrupt the flow of your narrative and lessen the impact of unexpected events.
Example:
Original: He suddenly appeared at the door.
Revised: He popped up at the door.
Original: The car suddenly screeched to a halt.
Revised: The car screeched to a halt.
4. "Really"
Similar to "very," "really" can be vague and is often unnecessary. Finding a more specific alternative enhances your writing.
Example:
Original: She was really excited.
Revised: She was thrilled.
The movie was really good.
Revised: The movie was outstanding.
5. "Seemed"
"Seemed" introduces uncertainty and can distance readers from the immediacy of the narrative. Consider replacing it with more decisive language.
Example:
Original: The solution seemed impossible.
Revised: The solution appeared impossible.
Original: His intentions seemed unclear.
Revised: His intentions remained ambiguous.
Remember, the goal is not to eliminate these words entirely but to use them judiciously and consider alternatives that convey your message with greater precision.
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Good article. Just to be clear, this does not apply to dialogue, right
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